When did it suddenly become cool to hate everything? It's a growing problem, especially in the entertainment world, and no one benefits from an increasingly hard to please, pessimistic audience.

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"Sick sky
Get well Cover up Tightly You're my Summer In this Winter Warm me with life I cant see with my eyes So you make me feel it Up and down my little spin And around my hips Around, around Somewhere in the blue forest You planted seeds They're going to grow Somewhere in the blue forest I cant give up now They're going to grow Empty room Flood with Transient Sun light This is all I need Just a little longer And I'll be able to feel You standing next to me Next to, Next to me Sick sky Get well I can't see If there's no light Sick sky Get well" Comments
Fan, freakin-tastic.
It says advanced critique encouraged, so: I think the words still take away from the image as a whole a little, design-wise. I think its because they feel pasted over the top. Maybe if you were to integrate them somehow, like by putting them behind the flower and the hand a little. That might just be my own personal taste though. This is amazing, man. Chao! -- Check out my Website: [link] Check out muh gallery!!! ----> [link] Thank you! I wasn't too hot on the text myself. The version I put on my myspace front page was without them but I thought it needed something else. I wanted to make it a little more on the commercial art side (graphic design side?).
I think I'll try doing what you suggested or just make the text more plain and part of the border and less as part of the piece. -- Only my body is proof, If I swallow down the night, thats my climax You've said yourself. It is painful, but it is also delightful
This is so different to what you showed before, but it remains as touching as it was before. At first sight, I felt there was something about the heart behind the text (on the lower right corner) that didn't fit... now that I have a closer look, that thing went away. Seamless! -- Site Index "I like your Christ. I do not like your christians. Christians are so unlike your Christ." - M. Gandhi |
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